Do I care? ([info]total_hottie) wrote,
@ 2003-04-19 10:20:00
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I Feel
I feel the icy fingers all around me,
Surrounding me.
Strangling me.
Suffocating me.
I feel your presence in my room,
Your sweet smell.
Your loving voice.
Your innocence.
Inside I am aloe and empty. Then you came. I am not alone anymore. But the emptiness inside attracts the icy fingers to come once again to,
Surrounding me.
Strangling me.
Suffocating me.
I can’t fight it off anymore. I am too weak. Death surrounds my limp and frail body. I am going somewhere were I can protect you.
Your sweet smell.
Your loving voice.
Your innocence.



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[info]total_hottie
2003-04-19 07:20 am UTC (link)
This poem was published 3 times, and won 2 awards.

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I do care.
[info]mindtramp
2003-04-20 10:13 am UTC (link)
I like that Poem, first time i have ever heard it, i never really looked for poetry, but i do enjoy it very much.

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